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loved the poem you posted today
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wow.. haven't seen you around in forever.. thanks
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psych0-wh0re : |
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hey i like your diary, v. cool.
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autumnal : |
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volcano
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k-hun : |
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check out my other diary, letters written to a guy who will never read them.. http://letteroflove.diaryland.com, lots of hugs..
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thanks for visiting
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dpentacles : |
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awesome writing..what more can i say?
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It's more than okay. Always. And each of us are always enough. More than enough. It is my theory that each creature is doing the best they can with what they have at this moment in eternity. (Even if it doesn't always seem that way!)
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that entry on love was truly amazing.. wow.. just.. wow.. i cant even believe it, its so true, so real.. i know exactly what you mean..
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Here it is, for Q1:
I burn for you on fire in sweetest agony and begging for mercy to be utterly consumed enraptured filled and the sum of my being rearranged flayed from my bones and molded under your hands against your flesh against mine around you around me to the peaks of triumphant
cumulous clouds exploding in waves of fire ice and sweat breaking beading washing in luminous tides to drown us in oceans of violet desire and wafting us on swelling fragrant updrafts to soar as eagles on the dawn and through silvery pools of the Milky Way to sip the nectar of the Big Dipper and inscribe our confident arc across the universe as we are launched from the bow of Orion to plummet into rippling seas of golden barley and warm wildflowers; I burn for you.
(Was that good enough?) :-)
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I would be happy to write something for the Q1 diary. You have no reason to feel as though you are less of a writer, by the way. You have your voice and you do what you do better than anyone else could ever do it or be it because it comes from you; from the unique and brilliant gem of your heart. Cheers, -Frank
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hey... do you like delete my guestbook entries or something? heh, anyways i love your writing like whoa. keep it up. ♥
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More great writing! (And the girl on your page is nice looking too!) <G> Cheers! -Frank
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wow.. awesome writing.. i can see you've heard that before.. but just wow.. im definently gonna put you on my favorites.. just keep at it.. no matter what.. thanx for reading this.. ~<3~
*kahla*
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yum...that is all i can think after reading your poetry...its satisfies like a glass of milk after chocolate cake
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Mohagany is correct. :-) It has a beautiful, beautiful, deep red glow to it... *happy sigh* :-)
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Wow! What a beautiful poem! I hope you don't mind, but I have copied and saved it, and assigned your name to it. Thank you very much. :-)
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Today's poem is nice! (Summer Lips) There is a freshness to the images that is inspiring. :-) As ever, thank you for the notes.
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its funny that you found me...i used to read poetical a lot...didnt know you had a poetry diary too (which by the way i love)! its a small (diaryland) world after all! <3
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The latest poem is... haunting. I have missed and been missed in that way. There is a bittersweet, wistful quality to that feeling... I hope your sweetheart makes his way home to you soon. Cheers...
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Yes, I am okay, although my little life seems to have undergone a very radical and abrupt change. Fortunately, I am not in a wheelchair, and things could certainly have been much much worse. In an odd way, I am grateful. Hell, maybe I'm burning off some strange karmic debt... :-) Thanks for your concern. Mostly, I am simply uncomfortable with this collar and the twinges of pain. None the worse for wear, and I have survived much worse things in my life. :-) Cheers!
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my bad grammar... phew... Haunting! I read it the first time and thought, "Nice poem!" And then I had to come back and read it again. "rubbed my memories raw on cold soap -- crying against boiled water -- clothed my pain in cotton and lace..." Each word grouping comes flashing out like a slap. Which is to say, it's brilliant. Good job!
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I really like your poetry. :-) You create some terrific word combinations... Keep writing! Cheers -Frank (aka red-skyline)
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thank you. *hugs*
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