sweetsugar17

A budding diarist working out the chinks. Good Job Darling...you are well on your way.

9 pts Great job!

Sweets diary has a great first impression appeal...with a lovely design by lisdesigns the brushes in the corner grab your attention and draw you into this well coordinated diary. The links and navigation are very simple, thought the Cast Page doesn't seem to be there yet. Updates are a bit sporadic and the Archive page needs to be looked at as all the entries lie on top of each other. This I believe can be fixed simply with another "br" HTML code in "How each entry looks on the older page" But see your designer for the specifics. Also there seems to be some discrepancy in the time line of your archives...it jumps from May 2003 back to February 2003 in the last posted entry.

Thanks for your patience in this review!

King Crab

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